answer post from 1 year ago
mybikeasmypride asked:

Hi! Your advice on breaking down plotting a story have been great! Do you by chance have any similar advice/breakdown on how to write a sequel or a next installment in a series?

fixyourwritinghabits:

I’m going to split this response in two, because before we talk about how to write a sequel, I think it’s helpful to talk about types of sequels and how they work. It’s not unusual that an author plans to write a sequel(s), but first has to pitch a book as stand-alone. It’s also not unusual for an author to plan a stand-alone, but land a multi-book deal, so it’s a good idea to give it some thought regardless. (Indie authors, you have more leeway with this, but there’s no reason not to consider sequels as well.)

Duologies. Increasingly popular, especially in YA, there’s a lot of advantages to the duology. Readership-wise, it’s easier to sell folks on a two-book series than a longer one, and if you’re writing for younger readers, you don’t have to worry about them outgrowing the series by the time the third or fourth book comes around. Duologies are good for tight-knit plots, first book cliffhangers, and I see them most commonly in fantasy and sci-fi. If you have a idea you know you can’t fit to one book, but aren’t sure you can manage three, consider the duology.

Trilogies. Still very common in adult sci-fi and fantasy. Good for long-reaching, expanded plots that need three books to cover, the final book dealing with the ultimate threat, finishing with a bang. If you want to do a trilogy, make sure you have a plan. The biggest issue trilogies face is readers dropping off after the second book, especially if it seems like the writer doesn’t know we’re they’re going.

Serial Stand-Alone books. Most common in mysteries, from cozy to police procedure, though you’ll also find it in urban fantasy. Stars the same characters, but deals with a different mystery (or monster) each time. Like a TV show, you’ll want a “series bible” for this in order to carry forward character development, but these books often operate as stand-alone stories for anyone picking them off the shelves. Interested in mysteries? Want to write the better version of Supernatural? This structure is for you.

The Episodic series. Useful for pretty much any genre, this type of series can’t really be read out of order. Like that part of Supernatural, where suddenly you had to know all the backstory from the last season (confession: I have not actually watched Supernatural), you’ll have to be familiar with the last book in order to fully understand the next, even though the problem or challenge might be completely different. A Song of Ice and Fire or Jonathan Stroud’s Lockwood and Co are good examples of this. Middle Grade also has a lot of these, like the Rick Riordan books.

Other:

  • The-not-quite-sequels: Books that seem unconnected, but actually carry through key characters from the last book. Diana Wynne Jones was a master at this.
  • Same World books: Just as it says, books based in the same world, but involves different characters. Terry Pratchett’s Discworld series is a good example of this.
  • Anthology series: Linked by theme or similar elements. Really common in romance.

In picking the type of series you want to write, consider the following:

  • How much story do I have to tell? If you’re focusing on a tight-knit, dynamic story focused on a character’s development, you’re going to want to lay out how long it’s going to take against the typical book lengths of the genre you’re writing for (remember, YA and MG tend to have strict word counts, and even adult fantasy readers might balk if your book becomes a doorstopper.) Duology/trilogies are your best bet here.
  • Is there enough of the world to explore over multiple books? If you want to do a serial or episodic series, you’re going to have to consider how much you have to work with. On one hand, if it’s a mystery, you’ll never run out of murders. You also have plenty of slice-of-life situations and mythology to pull from if you’re leaning toward those directions. But you’ll need to determine that before you launch down that road.
  • Consider your genre. Duologies/trilogies work well with sci-fi and fantasy. Literary novels are probably not going to get many sequels. Mysteries are going to lean toward stand-alone serials. Horror probably works best with episodic books, etc. You’re not limited by genre, of course, but it’s worth considering your audience and what they expect (and therefore will buy).

In Part 2, I’ll break down how to plot for your series, but I’m going to tackle that one tomorrow. Hope this helps in the meantime!


text post from 1 year ago

Preptober is on the horizon but I'm angling to get this plot outline sorted out before mid-month. I have a failure pattern when it comes to novel length work in that I slow to a crawl around the 75-80% mark of the draft (and occasionally give up.)

So I'm trying to get myself out of that pattern by putting myself in a place where I can write the end first (probably from the second pinch point onward), then drop into any scene I bloody well feel like and write from there as I get obsessive about certain beats (because 9/10 they turn out better when I'm walking around, doing something inane, and hyper-fixating on the action beats before I sit down and try to write.)

That means: I need a solid outline.

A few tips from the front lines, if you're getting ready for preptober too:

- If the mc is afraid of something, make them face that exact fear.
- If you show off a super weapon, make sure it goes off.
- If the mc has a secret, make sure it gets out.
- If the mc is trying to prevent something from happening, make sure it blows up.
- If the landscape is even remotely threatening, make sure it causes damages.
- If they try to fix the damages they caused, make sure that the result leaves them worse off than when they started.
- If the mc has something to lose, make sure they lose it -- and give them the strength and the impetus to try and get it back even if they fail every time because eventually, they'll overcome that adversity and demonstrate that they're stronger for it.

Conflict. Diaster. Conflict. Partial resolution. Conflict. Disaster. Setback. Setback. Setback. Damages rendered. Make some heroes out of the grey jelly that is your oc.

Let's fucking go, NaNoWriMo.


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Some Fun World Building Tips!

Disclaimer: Your plot/story comes first. Don’t add a bunch of flaunty details for the sake of ‘World Building’ if it doesn’t add to your story or takes it off course, It’s not worth it. These are just some things I’ve tried in different, separate stories that were fun exercises for me as a creator.


1.) Language!

This is the most useful if you have multiple countries in a fantasy world that interact with each other in some form or fashion. Most countries have a different national language, and then different dialects of that language. Therefore, if you have two characters from Country A and Country B that speak different languages and live a decent distance apart, they’re probably going to have different speaking structures and slang. For instance, maybe Character A always says ‘Oh my God’ and maybe Character B always says “My Gods!” Incorporating little details like that will make your story more real and believable without requiring writing out another language. 


Also, language is based on history, religion, and culture. If Country A and Country B have different religions, they’re going to swear differently. It’s more interesting if you don’t just substitute their god’s name into a generic phrase that is the same across all languages.


2.) Food!

Food is SUPER cultural and SUPER fun to play with while world building. What is considered “travel food” in the country? What do they drink out of? What’s a popular type of alcohol? What’s the traditional ‘comfort food’? Desserts? What do you offer guests when they come over to your house? This is also dependent on the terrain. If the country has a lot of swamp and bogs, they’re not going to have an endless supply of grains. If it’s mostly a prairie, they’re not going to have oranges. Do a little research on what type of foods could be grown in the environment your country is in, then figure out what foods can be made from these plants. 


This is really easy to incorporate into fantasy worlds by just mentioning for half a sentence what food the characters are eating, and it tells the reader a lot about the environment and culture of this country. 


3.) Education!

This one only works if you have younger characters who are attending school or receiving lessons. If you have the right environment for it, it’s really fun to mess around with. Ask yourself questions: what would my character study at this age in this environment? History? Math? Language? Art? Music? Philosophy? Magic? Combat? Religion? 


While your character is learning about the history of one or multiple countries, you can easily expand your reader’s depth of the world through short descriptions. You can explore the linguistics of a country’s language and develop time periods. I have one WIP where the main character is having to read multiple classical novels and plays, but she also reads modern fantasy. Having a history helps deepen the believability of a world. If you’re exploring art, music, or philosophy, make sure to mention famous artists, musicians, and philosophers that your character either despises or looks up to. Magic is fun too. What type of magic is your character learning? How do they practice it? How is it viewed by the majority? Combat depends on culture; different groups of people fight differently and use different weapons. Religion is fun to play with, and through an educational setting, it can be smoothly explained. 


Even picking just one or two of the above list (or even adding some more!) gives just a bit more depth to your story and solidifies your world!


4.) Popular Culture

Pop culture shapes our world soooo much it’s ridiculous. Having some version of it will make your world so believable. What is your world’s version of Taylor Swift or Pan!c at the Disco? What’s your world’s version of Fortnite dances? What are their ‘memes’, so-to-speak? Who do they make fun of? My high school of 300 people has inside jokes that make fun of our principal. Even if it’s a little jab at the president/king/dictator of a country, just add a little something extra that can help give a clear image of modern social culture.


5.) Media

How do the citizens of your country receive their news? Newspapers? Is there just a giant bulletin where the king posts news? What type of news do they receive? Politics? International? Economic? Environmental? Sports? Pop culture? Editorials? Feature stories? Do they receive news magically? If so, how? Do they have some form of radios or televisions? What issues are present in society? Is anyone doing anything about this?


This is fun because it’s a very real thing you can include that once again gives your story some believability. A large country needs some sort of communication, and through the media is one way to do that. In an absolute monarchy where news is completely controlled by the government, this can be used to show contrast if the king is indeed a bad king. Also, differences in mass communication between two countries (maybe one has a bulletin controlled completely by the king and another has a law protecting freedom of the press) can show differences between the two. Also, political cartoons are fun.


AND LAST BUT NOT LEAST!!

Study world history. Pay attention to differences between countries and mirror/combine elements of culture and history into your own original world. You learn the most from what has actually made it—the real thing!


text post from 1 year ago

Stupid Writing Hack: If your sentence doesn't sound quite right to you, and you're not sure how to make it flow better, read it in Ryan Bergara's Buzzfeed Unsolved Monologue voice. Then adjust your writing accordingly. It works wonders


text post from 1 year ago

How to Get Out of A Writing Slump

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Feeling a writing slump approaching you and your story? Get ready for some tips by guest writer Aamna to help get you focused and ready to continue your writing goals.

So writing slumps. Wow! Isn’t that a big can of worms? This little curse can descend upon a writer, no matter a beginner or published when they least expect it. And for several reasons. The most common instance can be when you are right in the middle of a story or a first draft. So here are some methods that I have come across in my writing journey, and have seen work really well for either myself or others.  

1) Take a break from your current project. Let your subconscious do the processing.

Sometimes you’re just not feeling your current project. How do get your heart back into it again? Drop it and do something else. What I would recommend doing in this situation is, write a short story. Or a poem. Or fanfic. It doesn’t have to be related to your WIP. It will get your conscious mind out of a rut, but it’ll still be processing in the back of your brain, and later when you come to your novel, Voila! You have a fresh set of eyes and renewed vigor for your story. 

2) There’s a reason NaNoWriMo has pep talks.

By far, the thing that has worked for me the most is listening to other writers speak. Even if it is just a writing buddy and not a published author, there is something truly magical about listening to a storyteller gush about their story with the passion of a hero ready to save the world. The incessant urge to create something just as beautiful or being on that high of imagination that washes over me as I listen to them has worked for me several times when I feel myself falling into a slump.

Go through the NaNoWriMo pep talks, listen to author interviews or podcasts, or find a writing buddy. Remind yourself how fun it is to write. 

3) Go back to the synopsis of your story to see what made you excited to write that in the first place. Rejuvenate the love! 

I have personally seen that doing this little can trick can give you that dose of motivation you need to get back into a story. It takes you back to that place when you loved that idea and gets you excited to work on it again. 

My ideas come to me in the form of something like a Goodreads synopsis, so whenever I want to get back to working on it again after a break (maybe because of upcoming exams or tests), I have seen that going through the “hook”, helps to re-ignite that love and excitement about the idea. 

4) Make a mood board or playlist for your characters or setting.

A writing slump may not necessarily be a complete turn-off from working on a story. It can also be that you are just in a position that you are not able to get the words out, but that doesn’t mean the only way to effectively work is ‘words.’

Creating aesthetics and playlists can be a very fun, entertaining exercise to do, and make the writing process seem less like a chore. 

5) Allow yourself the break. Don’t push yourself back into writing full-length novels or projects. 

Every time you take a break from writing does not have to be called a writing slump. Sometimes it’s way better to take a mental health break, or just put a pause for no other reason that you don’t want to, and you’d rather work on something else. 

You should know when to shelve a story or let a project go. It’s completely okay to stop in the middle of a WIP and delve into a new idea instead of forcing yourself to brainstorm and drag yourself through a story that you are not interested in anymore. A lot of the time that’s exactly what pushes you into a slump in the first place. 

6) Remove the pressure. Don’t let perfectionism hold you back.

Editing as you write is not the most advisable course of action, especially when you’re a new writer. And fretting about things like sentence structure, word choice, or minute grammar errors shouldn’t be the focus while you’re writing. The first draft of anything is a mess. This is when you should turn off your inner editor, and let your perfectionist inner-self take a back seat. Little things like these, even though you may not realize it, do a lot to demotivate you and take the away joy of writing because you feel that nothing you write is ever good enough. Don’t compare yourself to published authors. Their books have gone through developmental edits, copy edits, beta readers, and whatnot. 

Constantly expecting and beating yourself up for not being as good as someone else can push you into a slump faster than a boring story. 


Aamna (she/her) is a young devourer of books, stories, and any other form of words you can give her. More often than not, you can find her either reading, daydreaming about her seemingly never-ending WIP, or working on her blog. She likes to say that words are her superpower, and has a weird obsession with Marvel, ice cream, really bad art journaling, and Scrabble. She lives in India and is currently working on a Turkish-inspired fantasy novel. You can also follow her on IG.

Top Photo by Ryan Snaadt on Unsplash  


text post from 1 year ago

How To Develop A Distinct Voice In Your Writing

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Voice in writing is extremely important and can make or break your story as a whole. It’s imperative that you pay attention to how readers interpret your writing voice because loving the author’s storytelling style can sometimes be just as important as the story itself. Here are some tips to remember and some general rules to follow in order to make sure your writing voice is enjoyable to listen to for your audience.


General Introduction & Some Things To Note

  • Voice is an audience’s ability to read something and know you wrote it. It’s essentially your fingerprint on your work.
  • The syntax is how an author chooses to order words in a sentence and can play a large role in conveying your voice.
  • Voice does not have to be yours alone, but more on that later.

How To Develop Your Voice

Rule 1: Write Naturally

Use voice as a tool, but don’t let it control you. Don’t try to force voice into your writing. Forcing voice can make it sound awkward and push the reader away. 

Rule 2: Always Write For Clarity First

Be as clear as possible. Don’t embellish or use fancy words if unnecessary. If writing poetry, however, do the exact opposite.

Rule 3: Don’t Deviate Too Much From The Rules Of Writing

Doing this can alienate your readers. If you break the everyday rules too much and deviate from the technical conventions of writing, your readers may get distracted or lose track of what you’re trying to convey and what’s going on in the story as a whole.

Writing In Somebody Else’s Voice

A lot of authors choose to write stories from the point of view of a character in their story. Authors may also choose to write in a format that requires their voice to be that of someone who may be completely different than them. Being able to recognize small details that form a voice in your readers’ heads is very important, whether you’re telling them the story as yourself or through the eyes of another. Here are some tips on developing a voice that matches the point of view you are telling the story from:

Word Choice ~ Use words and phrases that are true to the character’s personality. If your character is a 21st-century teenager talking about some guy they’re “totally obsessed” with and want to “Netflix and Chill” with, then they probably won’t describe him as a “harrowing barbarian with golden flowing locks and a stone cold thirst for vengeance”. 

Observation ~ Be careful when describing what your narrator observes throughout the story. If your narrator is supposed to be somewhat oblivious or gullible, they won’t notice the incredibly subtle mannerisms in everyone around them in order to conveniently draw conclusions and convey every piece of information the reader needs to predict the ending of the story.

Focus ~ Be mindful of what your narrator focuses on when describing a situation or the people around them. If your narrator chooses to point out that a character they don’t like happens to have the latest Rolex, this will hint at the reader that the character has a distaste for those with lots of wealth and therefore is somewhat of the opposite of the person they dislike. The things a person focuses on can tell you a lot about who they are and what they think of the world, and that is a massive deal when it comes to voice.

Descriptions ~ How your character describes the situations and minute details is important. Whether they say “shuddered” instead of “shook” or “steamed” instead of “angry” plays a large part in the reader getting to know your narrator.


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Pixars 22 Rules of Story Telling

9 is worth the price of admission, holy crap.

This is genius. So many great writing tips!

And this is why Pixar is a master in their field.

Why do I feel so weird reblogging this… this is the weekend dammit!  Anyway, great advice.

Pixar you have no idea how much this actually helps me.

These are all fantastic pieces of advice.

For reference

For great reference

  1. Admire characters for attempting more than what their successes have been.
  2. Keep in mind what’s interesting to you as an audience, not what’s fun to do as a writer
  3. Trying for theme is important, however you won’t see what the story is about until you’re at the end of the story. Got it? Now rewrite.
  4. Once upon a time there was ____. Every day, ____. One day, _____. Because of that, _____. Because of that, _____. Until finally, ____.
  5. Simplify. Focus. Combine characters. Hop over detours. You’ll feel like you’re losing valuable stuff but it sets you free.
  6. What is your character good at or comfortable with? Throw the polar opposite at him. Challenge him. How does he deal with it?
  7. Come up with your ending before you figure out your middle. Seriously. Endings are hard. Get yours working up front.
  8. Finish your story. Let go even if it’s not perfect. In an ideal world you have both, but move on. Do better next time.
  9. When you’re stuck, make a list of what wouldn’t happen next. More often than not, the material that gets you unstuck appears.
  10. Pull apart the stories you like. What you like in there is a part of you. Recognize it before you use it.
  11. Why must you tell this story in particular? What’s the belief burning within you that your story feeds off of? That’s the heart of it.
  12. Discount the first thing that comes to mind. And the second, third, fourth, fifth—get the obvious out of the way. Surprise yourself.
  13. Give your characters opinions. A character being passive or malleable is easy for you as a writer, but it’s poison to your audience.
  14. What’s the essence of your story? What’s the most economical way of telling it? If you know that, you can build out from there.
  15. If you were your character, in this situation, how would you feel? Honesty leads credibility to unbelievable situations.
  16. What are the stakes? Give a reason to root for the character. What happens if he doesn’t succeed? Stack the odds against him.
  17. No work is ever wasted. And if it’s not working, let go and move on — if it’s useful, it’ll show up again.
  18. You have to know yourself, and know the difference between doing your best and being fussy. Story is testing, not refining.
  19. Coincidences that get characters into trouble are great. Coincidences that get them out of it is cheating.
  20. Excercise. Take the building blocks of a movie you dislike. How would you rearrange them into what you DO like?
  21. Identify with your situation/characters. Don’t write ‘cool’. What would make YOU act that way?
  22. Putting it on paper only allows you to start fixing it. If a perfect idea stays in your head, you’ll never share it with anyone.

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75% of writing is convincing yourself that your story is worth it

It is. In case you were wondering. Your story is worth the effort you are putting into it. It’s an amazing thing because you are writing it.

Even if you are writing fanfic. Even if you are writing tropes that have been done over and over. Even if you write it thinking others have done this same thing and done it better. “Better” is a lie. No stories are better or worse. Different stories touch people in different ways. The story that you think of as a forgettable, half-assed thing might touch somebody else to their bones. Don’t stop. And don’t be afraid.


text post from 2 years ago

imagine you’re at a convention and you’re reaching for a sasunaru doujinshi and someone else reaches for it at the same time and you look up and it’s megan thee stallion

i dont even watch naruto but like what did she mean by this

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i love you so much megan